Some comments (on the man page)

 * There is lots of markup in the examples which should not be
   there (commands and command options).

 * All section headers look the same.  For example, the header
   "Command Execution" and the sub-headers "Module and Function
   Commands" or "Delayed Execution of Commands" look exactly the
   same.  The sub-headers should be indented.

 * The standard man page section headers are not printed in
   capitals as they should be (the format of GNU style man pages
   is standardized), e.g. NAME, SYNOPSIS, DESCRIPTION etc.

 * The sections are not justified as they should be.

 * The first line of the man page does not contain the usual
   information:

     FVWM(mansection) ... something ... FVWM(mansection)

 * There are some examples with long lines (> 80 characters) or
   very funny formatting.  Generally it looks like long lines
   broken with \\ are not typeset correctly.

 * There is an inappropriate use of a single backtick in this line:

     undefine(`include')

 * A lot of text has been removed from the BUGS section.

 * THe section "command expansion" contains rubbish.

Ciao

Dominik ^_^  ^_^

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Dominik Vogt, [EMAIL PROTECTED]

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