Hi Dominik,

>  * There is lots of markup in the examples which should not be
>    there (commands and command options).

It conveys extra information (about what is a builtin command). I
consider it an improvement, but I can remove it if you feel strongly
about it.

>  * All section headers look the same.  For example, the header
>    "Command Execution" and the sub-headers "Module and Function
>    Commands" or "Delayed Execution of Commands" look exactly the
>    same.  The sub-headers should be indented.

Fixed.

>  * The standard man page section headers are not printed in
>    capitals as they should be (the format of GNU style man pages
>    is standardized), e.g. NAME, SYNOPSIS, DESCRIPTION etc.

Partially fixed.

>  * The sections are not justified as they should be.

Fixed.

>  * The first line of the man page does not contain the usual
>    information:
> 
>      FVWM(mansection) ... something ... FVWM(mansection)

Fixed.

>  * There are some examples with long lines (> 80 characters) or
>    very funny formatting.  Generally it looks like long lines
>    broken with \\ are not typeset correctly.

Fixed.

>  * There is an inappropriate use of a single backtick in this line:
> 
>      undefine(`include')

It's a verbatim copy of what's in the original man page.

>  * A lot of text has been removed from the BUGS section.

That's definitely an improvement.

>  * THe section "command expansion" contains rubbish.

I cannot reproduce this. Please let me know if you've still got this
problem.

Scott. :)

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