I noticed a grammatical error at the beginning of the man page so I started
poking around the web site to figure out how to contribute.  In accordance
FAQ 5.1, I've fetched the latest release and made my (very minor

In accordance with FAQ 5.2, I've updated the ChangeLog file and created a

Initially I was going to delete an extra comma, but once I had the document
front of me I noticed a few other minor things that I've also fixed.

While changing stuff I noticed that sometimes an fvwmref element is used
reserved words and other times it's not.  What's the rule for when to use an
fvwmref and when not?  Also, should these files use no more than 79 columns
line?  I saw a note about that for source code in CONVENTIONS after making

While looking for instructions on how to contribute, I noticed an issue
with the web site.  However the http://fvwm.org/documentation/faq/ is
generated, under the answer in section 5.2 there is a link to dev_cvs.php
includes the trailing period of the sentence and makes it a broken link.

Also under 5.2, there are references to doc/DEVELOPERS and doc/CONVENTIONS
it appears that these files actually exist under docs.

The instructions in the CONVENTIONS file appear to be out of date or maybe
incomplete, it refers to fvwm/fvwm.1.in for details on formatting but this
file doesn't appear to exist anymore.
? minor-doc-edits.patch
Index: ChangeLog
RCS file: /home/cvs/fvwm/fvwm/ChangeLog,v
retrieving revision 1.3151
diff -u -u -r1.3151 ChangeLog
--- ChangeLog	14 Apr 2013 08:39:09 -0000	1.3151
+++ ChangeLog	6 Apr 2014 00:44:35 -0000
@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+2014-04-05 Stephen Dennison <stephenrd(at)gmail(dot)com>
+	* doc/fvwm/description.xml:
+	fixed minor grammatical errors
 2013-04-14  Dominik Vogt  <dominik(dot)vogt(at)gmx(dot)de>
 	* libs/fsm.c (CompletNewConnectionMsg, FreeAuthenticationData)
Index: doc/fvwm/description.xml
RCS file: /home/cvs/fvwm/fvwm/doc/fvwm/description.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -u -r1.1 description.xml
--- doc/fvwm/description.xml	10 Mar 2007 05:15:34 -0000	1.1
+++ doc/fvwm/description.xml	6 Apr 2014 00:44:36 -0000
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 feel. Since then, fvwm has been greatly enhanced and practically
 all fvwm95 features can be achieved by fvwm.</para>
-<para>Fvwm provides both, a large
+<para>Fvwm provides both a large
 <emphasis remap='I'>virtual desktop</emphasis>
 <emphasis remap='I'>multiple disjoint desktops</emphasis>
@@ -35,16 +35,16 @@
 <para>Fvwm provides
 <emphasis remap='I'>keyboard accelerators</emphasis>
-which allow you to perform most window manager functions,
-including moving and resizing windows, and operating the menus,
+that allow you to perform most window manager functions,
+including moving and resizing windows and operating the menus,
 using keyboard shortcuts.</para>
 <para>Fvwm has also overcome the distinction between configuration
 commands and action commands that most window managers
 make. Configuration commands typically set fonts, colors, menu
-contents, key and mouse function bindings, while action commands
+contents, and key and mouse function bindings, while action commands
 do things like raise and lower windows.  Fvwm makes no such
-distinction, and allows anything to be changed at any time.</para>
+distinction and allows anything to be changed at any time.</para>
 <para>Other noteworthy differences between fvwm and other X11 window
 managers are the introduction of the <fvwmref cmd="Style" opt="SloppyFocus"/> and <fvwmref cmd="Style" opt="NeverFocus"/>

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