--On lørdag, januar 14, 2006 11:51:17 +0000 Adrian Farrel
<[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
The document introduction contains random blank lines. I expect that the
RFC Editor will find them and make sure the paragraphs make sense.
In section 3.9.1, H-LSP is not called out as a definition. I noticed
only
because it maps to a specific ITU-T term. Text is clear enough that a
reader shouldn't be bothered by this, however; not worth holding the doc
for.
I take this to mean that a new revision is NOT needed as a result of
GenArt review and the process can continue without further input from the
authors at this stage.
Yes, that's my opinion.
If you were to recycle the document for other reasons, this might be worth
looking at, but this is not reason for a recycle.
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