Thanks Harald, > For background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html. > > Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-ason-lexicography-06.txt > Reviewer: Harald Tveit Alvestrand > Date: Jan 14, 2006 > Trigger: IESG telechat submission for Informational > Summary: Ready for publication. > > This document, despite the caveats in the start ("don't try to use this > unless you know these 20 other documents by heart") is pretty readable, and > I think it will prove useful. > > It provides for mapping GMPLS terms into ASON terms; I think it would be > harder to use it the other way around. Mapping's unlikely to be perfect in > any case, so picking this approach and sticking to it is a Good Thing. > > Very well done job! > > Nits: > > The document introduction contains random blank lines. I expect that the > RFC Editor will find them and make sure the paragraphs make sense. > > In section 3.9.1, H-LSP is not called out as a definition. I noticed only > because it maps to a specific ITU-T term. Text is clear enough that a > reader shouldn't be bothered by this, however; not worth holding the doc > for.
I take this to mean that a new revision is NOT needed as a result of GenArt review and the process can continue without further input from the authors at this stage. Cheers, Adrian _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
