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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: ready Some little comments/suggestions which can be handled in AUTH48: the case of Format/format is not uniform, I propose Format everywhere if it is really a part of the name, or Format the first time and format for further cases, or format. in 3: mathmatical -> mathematical As the style is native (i.e,, not American) English I propose in 4 for Author/Change "shall" in place of "will" in "... itself will not change ." Regards [EMAIL PROTECTED] PS: the reference begins by "The CellML Umbrella format" so IMHO format should be lower case everywhere in the I-D even if the reference has no uniform use of lower case for "format"... _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
