I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-schoenw-snmp-ether-01.txt Reviewer: David L. Black Review Date: 25 Sept 2006 IESG Telechat date: 28 Sept 2006 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: This is a short update to (even shorter) RFC 1089 to define a TC and provide somewhat better explanation of a few things, written by a couple of experts. The -02 version is in the queue to be posted, but I reviewed the -01 version due to time constraints. The -01 version would be ok to publish as-is, but I concur with Cullen Jennings's comment that use of RFC 2119 language is appropriate, and I specifically suggest a couple of "MUST"s in the second paragraph of Section 3.2 to require the use of EtherType hex 814C and use of SNAP with LLC. I happen to know from history that IEEE is somewhat sensitive about proper EtherType usage. IANA needs clarification of what to do about SNMP domain registration - see the IANA comment in the I-D tracker. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Senior Technologist EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 [EMAIL PROTECTED] Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
