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Document: draft-ietf-netlmm-threats-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 15 November 2006
IESG Telechat date: 16 November 2006
Summary: Ready
Comments: I have some grammar questions which should be handled by
the RFC Editor in 3.1 page 8:
- can to trick -> can trick
- a variety of ... which make mouting -> makes? mounting
^ ^
(if someone finds the answer for the grammar point in the web,
can (s)he give a pointer? I've based my comment on French,
perhaps English is different. BTW "a large number of" is plural
without question).
- both on-link and off-link -> either on-link or off-link?
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