Thanks for the comments and apologies for the belated reply.
I fixed the "the the" bug.
In terms of UA vs. user agent, one of the reasons both are used (and
indeed both forms are used extensively in the document) is that "UA
instance" sounds much better than "user agent instance"; I generally
like to keep commonly referenced things to one or two words max. So I'd
prefer to keep it as it is.
Thanks,
Jonathan R.
Christian Vogt wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before
posting a new version of the draft.
Document: draft-ietf-sip-gruu-14
Reviewer: Christian Vogt
Review Date: August 10, 2007
IESG Telechat date: August 9, 2007
Summary:
This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Just 2
really small editorial nits.
Comments:
Section 1, 5th paragraph: s/the the/the/
The initialism "UA" is used for "user agent" in the beginning of the
document, but at the end of the document, "user agent" is spelled out.
I personally prefer the spelled-out variant and would recommend to use
that consistently throughout the document.
Best regards,
- Christian
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