I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-sip-gruu-14 Reviewer: Christian Vogt Review Date: August 10, 2007 IESG Telechat date: August 9, 2007 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Just 2 really small editorial nits. Comments: Section 1, 5th paragraph: s/the the/the/ The initialism "UA" is used for "user agent" in the beginning of the document, but at the end of the document, "user agent" is spelled out. I personally prefer the spelled-out variant and would recommend to use that consistently throughout the document. Best regards, - Christian _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
