I have been selected as the General Area Review Team
(Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on
Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-simple-prescaps-ext-08.txt
Reviewer: Christian Vogt
Review Date: October 26, 2007
Summary: Ready.
Comments: This document is ready for publication from my
perspective. Just two nits, which the authors may want to
correct:
Section 3.2.8. ("<message> element"):
The <message> element indicates that the service supports
message as a streaming media type as defined in [12].
s/supports message/supports messaging/
Section 3.2.10. ("<automata> element"):
The <automata> element indicates whether the service
represents an automata [...]
s/an automata/an automaton/
Hope this helps, regards,
- Christian
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