Hi, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Draft: draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-11.txt Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Review Date: 26 October 2007 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Comments: Acronyms (e.g., XML, SIP, RTCP) should be expanded on their first use. The document should clarify how errors are sent back to the original sender. This could be done in a new SIP INFO request or in the response to the original INFO request. The document should clarify which option should be used. The Security Considerations Section should briefly analyze the consequences of attackers modifying the commands sent between two endpoints. Thanks, Gonzalo _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
