Gonzalo, Thanks, I will fix and submit a new revision that will include also comments from Pete Cordell in the IESG last call Roni > -----Original Message----- > From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: Friday, October 26, 2007 2:18 PM > To: Orit Levin; Even, Roni; [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Cc: Joerg Ott; Colin Perkins; Jean-Francois Mule; Cullen Jennings; gen- > [EMAIL PROTECTED] > Subject: Gen-art review of draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-11.txt > > Hi, > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > > Draft: draft-levin-mmusic-xml-media-control-11.txt > Reviewer: Gonzalo Camarillo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > Review Date: 26 October 2007 > > > Summary: > > This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should > be fixed before publication. > > > Comments: > > Acronyms (e.g., XML, SIP, RTCP) should be expanded on their first use. > > The document should clarify how errors are sent back to the original > sender. This could be done in a new SIP INFO request or in the response > to the original INFO request. The document should clarify which option > should be used. > > The Security Considerations Section should briefly analyze the > consequences of attackers modifying the commands sent between two > endpoints. > > > Thanks, > > Gonzalo >
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