The -04 version of this document address the concerns about clarity of attributes from my review. Thank you. This document appears ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
------ I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Last Call reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html>http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: An Extensible Markup Language (XML) Patch Operations Framework Utilizing XML Path Language (XPath) Selectors Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern Review Date: 16-September-2007 Summary: This document appears ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. If a revision of the document is needed, the minor comments below should be considered for inclusion. Assumption: It is assumed by this reviewer that appropriate attention has been given to whether publication of this document would constitute encroachment on the turf of the W3C, and that appropriate liaison steps have been taken in order to ensure that the situation is well understood on both sides. Comments: Minor: I presume that there is related work in the W3C, and some reference to that work, or to the absence of such work, would probably be appropriate in the early part of this document. If there is related work, an indication of the differences in target / approach would be helpful. When giving examples in the text, it would be helpful if one could tell which parts of the example are literal, and which are substitutable. For the <add> element, the text talks about the 'type' attribute equalling "@attr", but then it becomes clear that the intention is an at-sign followed by the name of the attribute to be added. It also talkds about the 'type' attribute with the value "namespace::pref" and I am pretty certain that the intention is that the value must use the literal string 'namespace' and then the prefix intended to be used is to appear where 'pref'' appears. But it is really hard to tell. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
