I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-l1vpn-bgp-auto-discovery-04.txt Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: 25 Mar 2008 IESG Telechat date: 26 Mar 2008 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Proposed Standard. Couple of nits follow: One, I think it may help to expand the acronyms CE and PE since others such as L1VPN, CPI, and PPI are defined on first use. However, if CE and PE are well known to those versed in this particular domain, then feel free to ignore this nit. Second, you may consider adding whitespace around the top of Figure 2 so it appears on a page by itself instead of straddling pages. Makes for better readability. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA) Email: [EMAIL PROTECTED],bell-labs.com,acm.org} WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
