I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-08.txt
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication but I have some
comments.
Minor
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* MBZ undefined
I am not aware of any standard definition of MBZ in the IETF. Given
this, the document needs to define MBZ in its terminology. Something like
"The bits marked MBZ MUST be set to zero by senders and MUST be ignored
by receivers."
* Section 3.5 Creating Test Sessions
From my reading of this document I understand that the
Request-TW-Session command defined here is based on the Request-Session
command from RFC4656. This is not made explicit in this document. It
would also be helpful to have a command format ASCII art picture before
going into defining things. I also think that this section goes too much
into what OWAMP does, and I feel it distracts the reader. e.g. The
Conf-Sender and the Conf-Receiver text.
* Section 3.8
I think that the number of sessions field should be set to 0 since there
are no session description records that follow. Right now this field is
undefined in the draft.
Cheers
Suresh
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