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Document: draft-ietf-dime-mip6-integrated-10.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 10 Sept 2008
IESG Telechat date: 10 Sept 2008
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard.
A couple of nits below:
1) S4.2.1, first line:
s/type of Grouped/of type Grouped/
2) S7.1: Here, it may be helpful to the IANA editor if you inserted
the section numbers where the AVPs are defined; example:
OLD:
MIP6-Agent-Info is set to TBD
MIP6-Feature-Vector is set to TBD
MIP6-Home-Link-Prefix is set to TBD
NEW
MIP6-Agent-Info is set to TBD (Section 4.2.1)
MIP6-Feature-Vector is set to TBD (Section 4.2.5)
MIP6-Home-Link-Prefix is set to TBD (Section 4.2.4)
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
2701 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9F-546, Lisle, Illinois 60532 (USA)
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