Hi Vijay,
Thank you for your review. I'll incorporate the proposed changes to the
final version of the draft, whenever that is due to be submitted.
Cheers,
Jouni
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Vijay K. Gurbani [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
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> To: Korhonen, Jouni /TeliaSonera Finland Oyj;
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> Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Romascanu, Dan (Dan); General Area Review Team
> Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of
> draft-ietf-dime-mip6-integrated-10.txt
>
>
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
> reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
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> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
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>
> Document: draft-ietf-dime-mip6-integrated-10.txt
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 10 Sept 2008
> IESG Telechat date: 10 Sept 2008
>
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed
> Standard.
>
> A couple of nits below:
>
> 1) S4.2.1, first line:
> s/type of Grouped/of type Grouped/
>
> 2) S7.1: Here, it may be helpful to the IANA editor if you inserted
> the section numbers where the AVPs are defined; example:
>
> OLD:
> MIP6-Agent-Info is set to TBD
> MIP6-Feature-Vector is set to TBD
> MIP6-Home-Link-Prefix is set to TBD
> NEW
> MIP6-Agent-Info is set to TBD (Section 4.2.1)
> MIP6-Feature-Vector is set to TBD (Section 4.2.5)
> MIP6-Home-Link-Prefix is set to TBD (Section 4.2.4)
>
> Thanks,
>
> - vijay
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