On Tue, Nov 04, 2008 at 09:13:29AM +1300, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > I understand your explanations on both of my comments, so my > summary is that the text in the draft is not quite clear enough > for a newcomer to the issue. While that is often the case for > technical documents, I think another couple of sentences > culled from your explanations would make the draft more robust. > (Especially since the point of the draft is to clarify something > that was left unclear by the previous RFCs.)
I'll write up some additional introductory text. Thanks! _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
