I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-pdif-lo-profile-13.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Review Date: 2008-11-24
IETF LC End Date: 2008-11-30
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.
Comments:
- I have taken the effort of validating all the XML examples included in
the draft. I used the Xerces validator available at
http://validate.openlaboratory.net/. I find awkward to include 39 XML
Schema files (thanks to the OpenGML explosion of schema files), but that
doesn't seem to be a problem (other than for humans). Other than that,
the examples all validate.
- The short name of the draft (which is printed as a heading in every
page) is set to "GEOPRIV PIDF-LO Profile". I think it should be set to
"GEOPRIV PIDF-LO Usage", since neither the title nor the text refer to
the document as a profile.
- Section 1, first paragraph, add an informative reference to GMLv3 when
it is mentioned in the text.
- Section 2, 5th paragraph, expand "LIS" and "LCP".
- Section 5, the first paragraph on page 15. What is a "WGS84 CRS"? Is
this something where an informative reference could be added?
/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
+34-91-339-3608
Ericsson Spain
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