Suresh Krishnan wrote:
> Summary: This draft is well written, easy to understand and ready for
> publication as BCP, but I have a few comments of an editorial nature.
> 
> Section 2.1.2 Paragraph 3
> ==========================
> 
> * s/mechaism /mechanism/

  Fixed, thanks.

> Section 2.1.3
> =============
> 
> * s/interoperatibility/interoperability/

  Fixed, thanks.

> Section B.6
> ===========
> * Replace non existent reference [8] with a reference to RFC3629 (At
> least I think that was what the authors intended)

  The reference to [8] is in a verbatim quote from another document.  I
think it should be OK to leave it as-is.

  Alan DeKok.
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