I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-radext-design-05.txt
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Summary: This draft is well written, easy to understand and ready for
publication as BCP, but I have a few comments of an editorial nature.
Section 2.1.2 Paragraph 3
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* s/mechaism /mechanism/
Section 2.1.3
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* s/interoperatibility/interoperability/
Section B.6
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* Replace non existent reference [8] with a reference to RFC3629 (At
least I think that was what the authors intended)
Thanks
Suresh
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