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Document: draft-crocker-email-arch-12.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: May 11, 2009
IESG Telechat date: May 11, 2009
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
The draft has 0 major issues, 0 minor issues, and 2 Nits/Editorial
comments.
I did a first review on March 24, 2009 and -12 was released in
April, attending to my comments. A couple of nits in -12 are
below:
Major issues: None.
Minor issues: None.
Nits/editorial comments:
1) S3.1
s/VPIM [RFC3801] such as/VPIM [RFC3801], such as/
2) Figure 5, in the legend:
s/bpxes/boxes
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60566 (USA)
Email: v...@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org}
WWW: http://www.alcatel-lucent.com/bell-labs
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