Vijay K. Gurbani wrote:
Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments:

1) S3.1
 s/VPIM [RFC3801] such as/VPIM [RFC3801], such as/

2) Figure 5, in the legend:
 s/bpxes/boxes


cool.  thanks!

d/

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  Dave Crocker
  Brandenburg InternetWorking
  bbiw.net
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