I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve
these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-redirect-11.txt
Reviewer: Sean Turner
Review Date: 2009-06-21
IETF LC End Date: 2009-06-30
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
Nits:
Section 5 (last para) and Section 6 (1st para): Should "Informational"
(x3) be all upper case?
Section 8.3 (2nd para): r/3.10 of [2]/3.10 of [2].
^
Section 10 (4th para): r/more a certain/more than a certain
Section 10 (last para): r/might not available/might not be available
spt
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