Hello, On 6/21/09 1:10 PM, "Sean Turner" wrote:
> I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer > for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve > these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-redirect-11.txt > Reviewer: Sean Turner > Review Date: 2009-06-21 > IETF LC End Date: 2009-06-30 > IESG Telechat date: N/A > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > > Nits: > > Section 5 (last para) and Section 6 (1st para): Should "Informational" > (x3) be all upper case? Changed this to "INFORMATIONAL". I checked RFC 4306 to see what it does. It uses both "INFORMATIONAL" and "Informational". :) > > Section 8.3 (2nd para): r/3.10 of [2]/3.10 of [2]. > ^ > Section 10 (4th para): r/more a certain/more than a certain > > Section 10 (last para): r/might not available/might not be available Fixed in my local copy. Thanks. Vijay > > spt > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
