Sorry this is a couple of days late... I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dccp-quickstart-05 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 24 June 2009 IETF LC End Date: 22 June 2009 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready for publication as Experimental Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: Section 2.1: s/course-grain/coarse-grained/ Section 3.3.1: In addition, the requested rate MUST be less than or equal to the equivalent of a sending rate of 100 packets per second [RFC4828 CCID 4 [RFC4828] specifies that the allowed sending rate derived from the TCP throughput equation is reduced by a factor that accounts for packet header size. Something is screwed up in the reference to RFC 4828: are you missing a close bracket and a period? Section 4: The document does not modify Should be: This document does not modify _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
