I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html <http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html> ).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-hip-nat-traversal-08 Reviewer: Pete McCann Review Date: 2009-09-02 IETF LC End Date: 2009-09-02 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready for publication Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Abstract: elements of procedure SHOULD BE: elements of a procedure Section 4.7: periodically keepalives SHOULD BE: periodic keepalives _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
