Hi Pete,
Thanks for the comments. These will be fixed in the final version.
Cheers,
Ari
McCann Peter-A001034 wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer
for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html
<http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html> ).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-hip-nat-traversal-08
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2009-09-02
IETF LC End Date: 2009-09-02
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready for publication
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
Abstract:
elements of procedure
SHOULD BE:
elements of a procedure
Section 4.7:
periodically keepalives
SHOULD BE:
periodic keepalives
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