I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-connectivity-precon-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 2009-10-12 IETF LC End Date: 2009-10-14 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - 3.1 page 4: the precondition types don't include "sec" which is mentioned after (IMHO it is because it was added after the RFC 3312 cited the page before) - 5 page 10: succesful -> successful - 5 page 10: prequisite -> pre-requisite or prerequisite - 6 page 15: there are two "des:conn" in the last example, I believe it is a typo and the second is a "conf:conn"? - 7 page 15: TCP[RFC0793] -> TCP [RFC0793] Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
