Hi Francis,
thanks for your review. We will include your suggestions in the next
revision of the draft.
Thanks,
Gonzalo
Francis Dupont wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-connectivity-precon-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2009-10-12
IETF LC End Date: 2009-10-14
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
- 3.1 page 4: the precondition types don't include "sec" which is
mentioned after (IMHO it is because it was added after the RFC 3312
cited the page before)
- 5 page 10: succesful -> successful
- 5 page 10: prequisite -> pre-requisite or prerequisite
- 6 page 15: there are two "des:conn" in the last example, I believe
it is a typo and the second is a "conf:conn"?
- 7 page 15: TCP[RFC0793] -> TCP [RFC0793]
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