I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs-08.txt
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2009-11-25
IETF LC End Date: 2009-11-23
IESG Telechat date: -
Summary: The draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
Line 148
of DVB-RCS terminal management [SATLABS]. As a part of this
As a part ---> As part
Line 412
The DVB-RCS TDMA corresponds to the return or mesh link of a RCS
a RCS ---> an RCS
Line 413
transparent system or the uplink of a RCS regenerative system.
a RCS ---> an RCS
Thanks
--Avshalom
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