Thank you for your review! Jari
Avshalom Houri wrote:
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see _ __http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html_). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-combes-ipdvb-mib-rcs-08.txt Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-11-25 IETF LC End Date: 2009-11-23 IESG Telechat date: - Summary: The draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Line 148 of DVB-RCS terminal management [SATLABS]. As a part of this As a part ---> As part Line 412 The DVB-RCS TDMA corresponds to the return or mesh link of a RCS a RCS ---> an RCS Line 413 transparent system or the uplink of a RCS regenerative system. a RCS ---> an RCS Thanks --Avshalom
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