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Document: draft-hammer-oauth-07
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2009-12-01
IESG Telechat date: 2009-12-03

Summary: Version 07 of the document resolves the issue that I have raised
when reviewing version 03 and is ready for publication as an informational 
RFC.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

In lines 887, 936, 1113, 1248: "c2&a3=2+q" seems to be redundant.

Acknowledgements section is usually not put in the appendix (usually after 
IANA considerations).

Thanks
--Avshalom
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