So it is only my misunderstanding. Maybe it will be good to note that in the document.
--Avshalom From: Eran Hammer-Lahav <[email protected]> To: Avshalom Houri/Haifa/i...@ibmil, General Area Review Team <[email protected]> Cc: Lisa Dusseault <[email protected]> Date: 03/12/2009 01:53 AM Subject: RE: Gen Art LC and TC review of: draft-hammer-oauth-07 The ?c2&a3=2+q? string is used to demonstrate form-encoded entity-body. Not sure what you mean by redundant. EHL From: Avshalom Houri [mailto:[email protected]] Sent: Tuesday, December 01, 2009 8:35 AM To: Eran Hammer-Lahav; General Area Review Team Cc: Lisa Dusseault Subject: Gen Art LC and TC review of: draft-hammer-oauth-07 I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-hammer-oauth-07 Reviewer: Avshalom Houri Review Date: 2009-12-01 IESG Telechat date: 2009-12-03 Summary: Version 07 of the document resolves the issue that I have raised when reviewing version 03 and is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: In lines 887, 936, 1113, 1248: "c2&a3=2+q" seems to be redundant. Acknowledgements section is usually not put in the appendix (usually after IANA considerations). Thanks --Avshalom
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