I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-csi-sndp-prob-03.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Dec. 2, 2009
IETF LC End Date: ??
IESG Telechat date: Dec 3, 2009
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Informational;
I reviewed it as a generalist and found 0 major issues, 0
minor issues, and 3 nits.
Nits:
1) You may want to expand SEND before first use in Section 2;
you do so later on (below Figure 1), but should move that
up.
2) S2.3, below Figure 3: The text says that
"An alternative (alluded to in an appendix of ND Proxy)..."
You may want to provide a reference to the document containing
this appendix.
3) S3.3: s/options) [RFC4389]/options) [RFC4389].
(note the missing period above.)
Thanks,
- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
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Email: v...@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org}
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