Hi Vijay, at first thanks for your review.
2009/12/2 Vijay K. Gurbani <[email protected]>: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-csi-sndp-prob-03.txt > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: Dec. 2, 2009 > IETF LC End Date: ?? > IESG Telechat date: Dec 3, 2009 > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Informational; > > I reviewed it as a generalist and found 0 major issues, 0 > minor issues, and 3 nits. > > Nits: > 1) You may want to expand SEND before first use in Section 2; > you do so later on (below Figure 1), but should move that > up. OK. Fixed in the next version of the draft. > > 2) S2.3, below Figure 3: The text says that > "An alternative (alluded to in an appendix of ND Proxy)..." > > You may want to provide a reference to the document containing > this appendix. OK. Fixed in the next version of the draft. > > 3) S3.3: s/options) [RFC4389]/options) [RFC4389]. OK. Fixed in the next version of the draft. > > (note the missing period above.) > > Thanks, > > - vijay > -- > Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent > 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60566 (USA) > Email: v...@{alcatel-lucent.com,bell-labs.com,acm.org} > Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ > Thanks again for your review. Best regards. JMC. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
