Brian, thank you for the review & happy holidays. :) On Sun, Dec 20, 2009 at 4:50 PM, Brian E Carpenter <[email protected]> wrote: > > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer > for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-bryan-metalink-24.txt > Reviewer: Brian Carpenter > Review Date: 2009-12-21 > IETF LC End Date: 2010-01-08 > IESG Telechat date: > > Summary: Technically ready, but one copyright issue > -------- > > Major issues: > ------------- > > Note that the inclusion of the pre-5378 disclosure makes it unclear > whether the RelaxNG code can be licensed by the Trust in the normal way > (simplified BSD) under the current rules. It would be worth checking on this, > and maybe including some clarification beyond the standard boilerplate. If > the RelaxNG code is in fact submitted under RFC5378 conditions, i.e. is > not derived from older work, stating that fact would probably be enough. > If the code is in fact subject to RFC3978 conditions, stating that fact would > be helpful.
The latest revision (-25, unsubmitted) contains changes due to comments during last call: http://metalinks.svn.sourceforge.net/viewvc/metalinks/internetdraft/ We use "trust200902" in it. Does that resolve this issue? > Minor issues: > ------------- > > This is a bit picky, but section 4.1.2 contains a series of rules like > this one: > > o metalink:file elements MAY contain exactly one metalink:copyright > element. > > Note that (if parsed rigorously according to RFC2119) this does not forbid an > element that contains more than one metalink:copyright element. To be > rigorous, > you'd have to add "and MUST NOT contain more than one such element". I'm not > sure > if you want to go there... Let's be rigorous. I'll make those changes. Why wouldn't we want to go there? > Comment: > -------- > > I have not checked any of the RelaxNG code from a technical viewpoint. Julian Reschke recently checked it, and those changes are in the latest revision. -- (( Anthony Bryan ... Metalink [ http://www.metalinker.org ] )) Easier, More Reliable, Self Healing Downloads _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
