I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-roach-sip-http-subscribe-06.txt
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Proposed Standard
but I have a few comments.
Meta
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* How does the mechanism in the draft relate to say an atom or an RSS
feed? When would one use the sip subscribe mechanism instead of atom and
vice versa? Perhaps it is out of scope of this document, but I was just
curious.
Minor
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* Section 3.2
The example using two URLs each in www.example.com and www.example.org
is too complex. I do not see the value in adding the www.example.org
URLs. Are these necessary Can you simplify this to
For example: consider the case in which a client wishes to monitor
the resources http://www.example.com/goat,and
http://www.example.com/sheep. It would use HTTP to perform HEAD
and/or GET operations on these resources. The responses to these
operations will contain link relations for both monitor and
monitor-type for each of the four resources. Assume the monitor
link for http://www.example.com/goat is sip:[email protected];
for http://www.example.com/sheep, sip:[email protected]. Further,
assume the monitor-group link for http://www.example.com/goat and
http://www.example.com/sheep are both sip:[email protected],
Because they share a common monitor-group link, the client would
group together http://www.example.com/goat and
http://www.example.com/sheep in a single subscription. It sends
this subscription to the monitor-group URI
(sip:[email protected]), with a resource-list containing the
relevant monitor URIs (sip:[email protected] and
sip:[email protected]).
* Section 3.3
This section is very interesting and useful. Why does it need to be removed?
Typo
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* Section 4.7
s/supress/suppress/
Thanks
Suresh
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