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Document: draft-ietf-nsis-ntlp-statemachine-09
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2010-03-17 (late - sorry)
IESG last call date: 2010-03-12
Summary: The document is ready to be published as an informational RFC
Major issues: None
Minor issues: Noen
Nits/editorial comments:
Line 532
Error response, send by the Responding node indicating lost
-> Error response, sent by the Responding node indicating lost
Line 795
**) Depending on the local policy NSLPdata might be send as payload
--> **) Depending on the local policy NSLPdata might be sent as payload
avshalom
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