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Document: draft-ietf-6lowpan-routing-requirements-06
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: 2010-05-13
IETF LC End Date: 2010-05-13
IESG Telechat date: 2010-05-20

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 1 Introduction:
   by either at below IP layer (the
   adaptation layer or LLC) or the IP layer.
SHOULD BE:
   either below the IP layer (the
   adaptation layer or LLC) or at the IP layer.

Section 6:
   Security issues are described in Section 4.4 of the security
   considerations of RFC 4919 [RFC4919] and RFC 4944 [RFC4944] apply as
   well.
SHOULD BE:
   Security issues as described in Section 4.4 of the security
   considerations of RFC 4919 [RFC4919] and RFC 4944 [RFC4944] apply as
   well.

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