Dear Pete McCann, Thanks a lot for your comments. We, the authors, surely apply your comments and provide revised text after collecting all comments.
-Eunah On Fri, May 14, 2010 at 10:57 AM, McCann Peter-A001034 <[email protected]> wrote: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer > for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you > may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-6lowpan-routing-requirements-06 > Reviewer: Pete McCann > Review Date: 2010-05-13 > IETF LC End Date: 2010-05-13 > IESG Telechat date: 2010-05-20 > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > Section 1 Introduction: > by either at below IP layer (the > adaptation layer or LLC) or the IP layer. > SHOULD BE: > either below the IP layer (the > adaptation layer or LLC) or at the IP layer. > > Section 6: > Security issues are described in Section 4.4 of the security > considerations of RFC 4919 [RFC4919] and RFC 4944 [RFC4944] apply as > well. > SHOULD BE: > Security issues as described in Section 4.4 of the security > considerations of RFC 4919 [RFC4919] and RFC 4944 [RFC4944] apply as > well. > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
