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Document: draft-ietf-opsec-igp-crypto-requirements-00
Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
Review Date: 2010-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2010-09-03
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Summary: The document is almost ready for informational RFC

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

The document can benefit from some editing/rephrasing to make it easier to 
read.

Lines 236-237
   understanding that interoperability considerations will require 
   change to a MUST as operators migrate to this authentication scheme.
-> Not sure what this actually means.

Nits/editorial comments:

Line 215
   scheme as provides no protection against an attacker with access to 
->    scheme as it provides no protection against an attacker with access 
to 

Line 232
   be deprecated in future. 
->    be deprecated in the future. 

Line 249
   MD5 MUST be implemented, but its use may be deprecated in future. 
->    MD5 MUST be implemented, but its use may be deprecated in the 
future. 

Line 254
   future. 
-> the future.

Line 392
   interoperability purposes, but its use may be deprecated in future. 
->    interoperability purposes, but its use may be deprecated in the 
future.
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