On 9/6/10 9:27 AM, Avshalom Houri wrote:
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Thank you.

I think most of the comments are uncontroversial,

line 236-237 has the following implications:

RFC 5310 states that is-is implementations should implement support for
the generic cryptographic authentication scheme. If at some future date
recommendations were to support a key method other than HMAC-MD5 then it
would follow that support for the generic cryptogrphic authentication
scheme would become a requirement.


> Document: draft-ietf-opsec-igp-crypto-requirements-00
> Reviewer: Avshalom Houri
> Review Date: 2010-09-06
> IETF LC End Date: 2010-09-03
> IESG Telechat date: (if known)
> 
> Summary: The document is almost ready for informational RFC
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues:
> 
> The document can benefit from some editing/rephrasing to make it easier
> to read.
> 
> Lines 236-237
>    understanding that interoperability considerations will require
>    change to a MUST as operators migrate to this authentication scheme.
> -> Not sure what this actually means.
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> Line 215
>    scheme as provides no protection against an attacker with access to
> ->    scheme as it provides no protection against an attacker with
> access to
> 
> Line 232
>    be deprecated in future.
> ->    be deprecated in the future.
> 
> Line 249
>    MD5 MUST be implemented, but its use may be deprecated in future.
> ->    MD5 MUST be implemented, but its use may be deprecated in the
>  future.
> 
> Line 254
>    future.
> -> the future.
> 
> Line 392
>    interoperability purposes, but its use may be deprecated in future.  
> ->    interoperability purposes, but its use may be deprecated in the
> future.

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