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Document: draft-ietf-sidr-keyroll-06.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 18 May 2011
IETF LC End Date: 18 May 2011
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Summary: Ready. One minor nit regarding the use of the term 're-issue'
in s4.
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
s4, s4.1 and s4.2:
The term 're-issue' is used in this section regarding the new
certificates that the CA creates, e.g. in s4.1:
When a CA, as part of the key rollover process, re-issues a CA
certificate,
The term 're-issues' might be slightly confusing. Its a new certificate
but with lots of fields the same. I would be inclined to go with
'issues new' but its a quibble.
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