> -----Original Message-----
> From: Pete McCann [mailto:[email protected]]
> Sent: Friday, June 17, 2011 8:31 AM
> To: [email protected]; [email protected]
> Subject: Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-dkim-mailinglists-11
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Hi Pete,

> Section 5.6: in general, the techniques outlined in this
> section could be used by any recipient, not just MLMs.
> Perhaps this is how ADSP should have been specified.

A lot of this document reveals operational experience gained since ADSP was 
published, so you're probably right about these points (unfortunately).

> Section 3.3:
>    resending MLM typically make
> SHOULD BE:
>    resending MLM typically makes

Fixed.

>    Therefore not seen
> SHOULD BE:
>    Therefore this is not seen

Fixed.

> Section 5.6:
>    would have accommodate
> SHOULD BE:
>    would have to accommodate

Fixed.

Thank you!

-MSK

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