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Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-fat-pw-07
Reviewer:  Mary Barnes
Review Date:  19 2011
IETF LC End Date:  20 May 2011
IESG Telechat Date: 25 August 2011

Summary:  Ready with nits

The minor issues and nits in my Last Call review have been addressed. There
are a couple nits that were introduced with these changes.

Nit:
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- Section 1.2: "it will always be will preceded" ->  "it will always be
preceded"

- Section 8.5: There's a stray "In a" at the end of the first/only
paragraph.
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