Okay, your proposal looks good to me, many thanks. Regards! -Qin Wu ----- Original Message ----- From: "Miguel A. Garcia" <[email protected]> To: "Qin Wu" <[email protected]> Cc: "Zhen Cao" <[email protected]>; "Hui Deng" <[email protected]>; "Stephen Farrell" <[email protected]>; "General Area Review Team" <[email protected]> Sent: Friday, February 03, 2012 3:57 PM Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07
> Hi Qin Wu: > > As far as I remember, there is a policy in force that does not allow URLs > in RFCs, in particular in the IANA section. I believe that the motivation > is that URLs can change with time. > > The proposal is (something around these lines): > > Further, this document instructs IANA to add a new lable in the User > Specific Root Keys (USRK) Key Labels of the Extended Master Session Key > (EMSK) Parameters registry, as follows: > > EAP Early-Authentication Root [email protected] > > /Miguel > > > On 03/02/2012 8:43, Qin Wu wrote: >> Hi, Miguel: >> I think you are looking for this registry. >> http://www.iana.org/assignments/emsk-parameters/emsk-parameters.xml >> To make clear, the proposed change is replace the OLD Text >> " >> Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label >> from the "USRK Key Labels" name space with a value: >> >> EAP Early-Authentication Root [email protected] >> " >> With the NEW Text: >> " >> Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label >> from the "User Specific Root Keys (USRK) Key Labels" name space >> maintained at >> http://www.iana.org/assignments/emsk-parameters/emsk-parameters.xml >> with a value: >> >> EAP Early-Authentication Root [email protected] >> " >> Hope this addresses your comment. >> >> Regards! >> -Qin Wu >> ----- Original Message ----- >> From: "Miguel A. Garcia"<[email protected]> >> To: "Zhen Cao"<[email protected]> >> Cc: "Hui Deng"<[email protected]>;<[email protected]>; "Stephen >> Farrell"<[email protected]>; "General Area Review >> Team"<[email protected]> >> Sent: Friday, February 03, 2012 3:18 PM >> Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-hokey-erp-aak-07 >> >> >>> Zhen, >>> >>> The issue with IANA is double: >>> >>> On one side, you need to clearly indicate to IANA which registry they >>> need to change. >>> >>> On another side, someone reading this RFC should be able to go to >>> www.iana.org and find the registry. >>> >>> The solve both issues you don't need a reference to RFC 5295. What you >>> need to say "Extended Master Session Key (EMSK) Parameters registry" in >>> the IANA considerations section, because this is the official name by >>> which the registry is known. >>> >>> BR, >>> >>> Miguel >>> >>> On 03/02/2012 8:11, Zhen Cao wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> - Another topic, Section 9 (IANA Considerations) reads: >>>>>> >>>>>> Further, this document registers a Early authentication usage label >>>>>> from the "USRK Key Labels" name space with a value: >>>>>> >>>>>> EAP Early-Authentication [email protected] >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> I am missing the sentence to name the master registry where the USRK >>>>>> Key >>>>>> Labels subregistry is stored. This is the Extended Master Session Key >>>>>> (EMSK) >>>>>> Parameters registry (I guess). And probably this comment is also valid >>>>>> for >>>>>> the rest of the IANA actions: the main registry is not named, and it >>>>>> is hard >>>>>> to find it. >>>> [CZ]: EMSK or DSRK lable is defined in the section 8.1 "Key Lables" of >>>> RFC5295. We will add reference to RFC5295 to fix this. Thanks. >>>> >>>>>> >>> >>> -- >>> Miguel A. Garcia >>> +34-91-339-3608 >>> Ericsson Spain > > -- > Miguel A. Garcia > +34-91-339-3608 > Ericsson Spain > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
