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Document: draft-ietf-mediactrl-6231-iana-00.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2012-03-07
IETF LC End Date: 2012-03-08
IESG Telechat date: 2012-03-15
Summary: The document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC
Major issues: none
Minor issues: none
Nits/editorial comments:
| 433 | Unsupported | the request contains | RFC6231 |
| | collect and | <collect> and | |
| | record | <record> elements and | |
| | capability | the MS does support | |
"does support" --> "does not support" ?
| | | these operations | |
| | | simultaneously | |
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