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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-idr-rfc4893bis-06.txt Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 2012-06-12 IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-15 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: The draft is ready for publication, with a couple of minor editorial nits. Major issues: - Minor issues: - Nits/editorial comments: GENERAL: Q_GEN-1: Sometimes the text says "AS number", and sometimes "Autonomous System number". Please use consistant terminology. Q_GEN-2: Sometimes the text says "2-octet", and sometimes "two-octet". Please use consistant terminology. Q_GEN-3: Sometimes the text says "4-octet", and sometimes "four-octet". Please use consistant terminology. SECTION 4.2.1: Q_4_2_1-1: I suggest to replace "OLD one" with "OLD BGP speaker". Regards, Christer _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
